There are little faux paux throughout the book, that I really dislike, that should not have been missed.
Mentions Pollux being in the room (which can't be) and then it corrects some pages onward, mentioning that Pollux was out.
Now at 58% mentions Duchess. she would not be duchess, she would be countess.
It's little things, but the fact that as a reader you notice, takes you away from your imagination...
— Apr 18, 2022 05:54AM
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