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Ok. Pg 259. 6 months later. Christmas.

This gets more ridiculous and melodramatic as I keep reading

Oh now Nick has a clairvoyant cousin-in-law? How convenient.

This writing is so lazy! No continuity.

Working at Lorrie's house, Holly took a shower, was in his robe, got a call that she has an appointment, then went to the car with Nick.

But as far as the reader knows, she's still in a robe. Get dressed!

I'm not convinced Jude Deveraux is a woman. She doesn't seem to know what a teddy is, or what good sex is.

Oh my... that sex scene came out of nowhere!

I very much doubt this author has been in a real snowstorm

I think she describes people's looks with too much detail.