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I have never been more insulted by a main character 😂 she keeps talking about how fat she is, at 175 pounds and is too old to wear jeans. She’s 39.

At this point in the book, I should be falling for the characters while being frustrated at their blindness. There should be excitement, anticipation. But there’s nothing. There is not a single likable thing about the MC, nothing endearing about the FMC. There too much dialogue, too much exposition in the dialogue. I don’t need to know every muscle twitch or movement they make. Move it along!

Switching to audio or I will never finish this book

I’m really don’t like this book, but I want it to get better. I hope it gets better…

I always struggle with journal style books because abuse they are written like normal narratives just with some occasional references that it’s really a journal. Maybe I just haven’t read enough diaries for this to be believable, but it always pulls me out of the story.

I really need this to be an easy, suck you in kinda story. So far, it’s a Wikipedia page for the Caribbean…

This is gonna take a while to get through on p29, I was ready to DNF
•1st pov from fmc, but told like it’s all in her past and she’s telling a memory. Which would be fine, except all the detail and description make that hard to believe.
•NO QUOTATION MARKS why?! What is the point?! I think it has something to do with the narration style, which I hate. I hated it in Berry Pickers too
Started picking up by p39