Adria’s Reviews > Say You'll Be Mine > Status Update

At this point in the book, I should be falling for the characters while being frustrated at their blindness. There should be excitement, anticipation. But there’s nothing. There is not a single likable thing about the MC, nothing endearing about the FMC. There too much dialogue, too much exposition in the dialogue. I don’t need to know every muscle twitch or movement they make. Move it along!