Honestly, the story is not that bad. It does have errors and can be redundant. The characters ask questions that I’m sure the author thought the reader would be asking but they would’ve never crossed my mind. Ex: why would a secluded village that doesn’t allow visitors have spare houses? I can think of manyy reasons but the author chose to go with: to house injured ppl… wouldn’t they have an infirmary alr?
— Aug 19, 2025 03:00PM
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