how is everyone chill with this guys prose? the plot is so far interesting but it is rough with some of this dialogue. nobody in real life talks/thinks/inner monologues like that!! also i feel like there is a lot of redundancy. straight up im only like 1/3 through and he has specifically stated that he launched the calculator app like 4 times!!!!!! i get you have a calculator bro you dont have to tell me evry time!!!
— 7 hours, 14 min ago
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