Like. This is fine. Im finding the way that the camp is written to operate in the book bothersome bc it feels irresponsible and not well thought out. I also feel like the time jumping around from the 50s to the 80s is making the story feel less coherent and im losing the immersion that only starts to build each time before they switch time and perspective.
— Jun 24, 2026 10:49AM
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