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Interesting. I’m in but I’d like it to be known that I do not like “Pinkies” as a name for the robots. But I’m trying not to be petty about it.

Her parents???? Nope DNF

Wait. He put a butcher block counter top and refinished the floors on property he doesn’t. Oh these two are perfect for each other I however am over them.

“Her inner nerdy teenager was shrieking obnoxiously in her head. The cutest guy in town had given her his sweatshirt and she could barely stand it.” You’ve been “dating” all summer and had sex multiple times. Ok.

I can deal will hallmark vibes and dialogue … unfortunately it seems like this second installment is more like a high schoolers diary …. Wattpad ?
Yikes.

Okay this is fun. Im really loving the paranormal bits. The FMC was a little too self deprecating at first but I really appreciated her sister putting her in her place. Also the MMC finding out bad news and IMMEDIATELY telling her like an adult also very much appreciated.

Okay. So that’s how he goes out are you kidding me? How anti climatic..also like your telling me there are no other children of Loki?

Nameless is my name ???? HOW DARE YOU

Omgggggg I am not having fun

I am a big fan of a DNF but this is free through Library so I guess I’ll finish it. But I am not having fun

“My power is my own.” I screamed. “As is my fate.” I roared. If you screamed this powerful moment then why the hell does the narrator sound like she whining and unsure of the words she’s saying. Like this is a pivotal powerful moment. Her voice carries up then finishes in a whisper. Like the action is confident… make it make sense.

I just feel like I would have zero regrets about sending kidnappers, murders, and pillagers to hell. What’s the issue?

My mouth turned sour my belly turned sour. Please stop

The words “piece of shit” don’t fit in the language here. Why is it here. Stop PMO

Finalllly let’s fucking MOVE ON from the “lie”.

EYEROLL

Oh now it’s okay now because he resisted a siren. Jeeezzz whatever as least we’re done with that. Let’s move on.

I’m gonna keep going because overall I like plot/magic but I just want to say: I am fucking sick of fantasy romance saying “strong FMC” and then I am given an irrational jealously driven women for almost an entire book. Those two things are not the same and it’s pissing me off that sarcasm and irrationality are being passed as “strong”.

If “he lied” comes up one more time I’m gonna DNF… far too iron flame. I genuinely LOVED book one. Don’t PMO

After all that. You’ll let your brother just leave after a quick fight… then immediately jump to dinner at your not boyfriend’s- boyfriend’s parents house.
No.

I said don’t piss me off. I can’t finish this

Oh. Okay. Gross.

Princess Donut Level 1
Love.

“The chicken which is probably delicious tastes like sand in my mouth”
Why? You’ve been starving for months …. You’ve been through a different set of trials before, one person is now making you sit at a table and suddenly the chicken isn’t good.
Don’t piss me off.

I like the premise and the plot so far.
I just don’t think I like the narrator. I don’t need you to use a baby voice for me to understand that we’re in your pov as a child. I feel like I’m watching Rugrats and not in a good way. Also when explaining anything that you disagree with why are you on the verge of tears. Cut it out.

Fake dating…. But literally everyone knows it’s fake aside from like 2 people okay. DNF

“They deserve a rest, I think”
Okay. Okay. Okay. I’m fine. Just fine.

“They were of Preservation all along”
K bye crying.