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The plot has been pretty good and consistent. I would have liked to see more interaction between Tomi and Lee in terms of conversation. However, that is not how Lee identifies. Overall, great plot, interesting and well thought out characters, and the villian(s) are really interesting. I enjoy the multidimensional faucet of this book, & how it touches on theories I enjoy like time and space.

Getting interesting and pace picking up with plot. Dotty has forgotten a lot about her mother's death. Ruth has had a horrible life thus far, but hoping it gets better at some point.

It's turning quite gnarly with a birthing, but it seems accurate to what would have happened in this time period.

Ruth seems to choose her words very carefully. Tactical and precise - calculated. Dorothea appears to currently have bitten off way more than she wanted or could expect.