Notes so far:
Beginning of story: projecting herself through the painting? Reality,wants,needs.
Found out that no it was actually the story of the boys
The three friends story is good and I like those parts but the present isn't good. Two unbearable people.
Now: why are we introducing a new character a girl? I liked the original three boys best.
— Aug 11, 2026 08:34AM
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