not sure how to feel thus far. opening my eyes regarding my own writing bc i now see how easily a scene thats trying to be dreamlike and surreal can turn into something confusing and annoyingly passive. so far the protagonist feels like a leaf drifting in the wind like girl do something. on the other hand there have been some really exciting and interesting moments so i hope there are more of those to come
— Oct 28, 2024 06:18AM
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