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is on page 100 of 383
not sure how to feel thus far. opening my eyes regarding my own writing bc i now see how easily a scene thats trying to be dreamlike and surreal can turn into something confusing and annoyingly passive. so far the protagonist feels like a leaf drifting in the wind like girl do something. on the other hand there have been some really exciting and interesting moments so i hope there are more of those to come
— Oct 28, 2024 06:18AM
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is on page 152 of 383
“All I could think was that dream of me was in there somewhere. Floating around inside her skull like one of those jellyfish I once saw at the aquarium. Slippery. Fragile. Mine.”
finally starting to pick up and i am enjoying this book more the more i read. trying to finish it today fingers crossed
— Nov 04, 2024 06:24PM
finally starting to pick up and i am enjoying this book more the more i read. trying to finish it today fingers crossed
