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It's exhausting how unrealistic everyone is acting. There's only so far I can suspend my disbelief.

This is so weirdly written. Oddly stiff, disjointed, and staccato. No one speaks like actual human beings. None of their reactions make much sense. Maybe it's the case of this being the writer couple's first joint publication, but so far I don't get the hype at all.

For a book with very early foreshadowing, this is loooooong and sadly not very engaging.

Reading the first two books in the series, since I skipped them and started with the third. The quality is unchanged, it's just as good as the latter books in the series.

He sat up and grabbed her, – ‘He could no longer fight against her thundering, roaring desire. And when they finally came, his brain was filled with a white light and a burning, almost unspeakable desire for a cold Coke.’

It's so rare that sex scenes are well written, let alone funny, but this one had me burst out laughing XD

Love the artwork so much!

Though I love the imagination in this and the writing is unique and one of its kind, the writing is also kinda working against itself. The archaic formula and sentence structure makes it extremely hard to stay focused 😅