So here’s my issue with this author’s writing. One minute the heroine is with her friends.. instead of casually moving the dialogue to a new scene, the next sentence the heroine is somewhere else. I am surprised no one has touched upon this, or maybe they have, but this is the second book by this author that I have read and I am finding the same issue. I will continue for now.
— Feb 20, 2022 05:21AM
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