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Okay. I really don't know if I can do it far then first chapter. I can't see the plot behind this horribly written text! Senseless repits, ridiculous amount of same pronoun (especially they/them/their). I have a strong impression that I make more work when writing comments on Facebook than made writer in this book.

It's still bad, like I read 5th grade homework pages about how the kid spent last summer, but he all time just played World of Warcraft and needed to wrote at least something in the way he can... In 2 sentences in a row, "they/their/ was written 6 times. Does the author read his book? Had it edited at all??

Begin to interested in. But still difficult to read because of mixing fiction language and non fiction information

Cheap collage of World of Warcraft and Tolkien universe. I'm not a fan of fan fiction, which I see in this book. And bad formatting and editing additional melting my eyes. Like word "tower" 6 times on one page. And when paragraph a few times ended in the middle of one sentence. Looks like something that was made on one knee for "easy money"