started out really good but i like it so much less now. she went like 60 pages without dialogue and is doing a lot of telling rather than showing. she’s also just dropping a bunch of names/places that i don’t know but am expecting to be wealthy things to know or have. im having a hard time reading just a list of things she says were hard. plus she’s rich so im getting annoyed of everyone in the story haha
— Jul 16, 2026 06:04AM
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