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Really enjoying this, it takes a little bit to get into but once you wrap your brain around the language it’s a great read!

Loving this so far. Historical fantasy rooted in real world issues.

I want to persist with this book but my goodness the writing is terrible. I’m a grade 5 teacher and my students write better than this, the creative ideas are there but the application is terrible. You can tell there hasn’t been a proper edit as there are so many issues with incomplete sentences and grammatical structure. We will see how it progresses but it’s difficult to read.