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The Latin names of the fauna to be italicized… Latin is always italicized.

So far, it’s like every paragraph is a different way of saying the same thing— Mt. Fugi created lava tubes which make the soil porous and the volcanic ash gives it nutrients. I feel like I’ve read about that 50 different ways. The first 3 chapters could have been one combined chapter about a page and a half long.

The writing is good, but it’s repetitive as hell.

One story down— haunted house possesses author Oleron to die, house murders Elise.

Page 107, last paragraph before attitude is great. It expounds on how motive changes with how much we readers and characters know at that time.

Love the maps, history, location descriptions, and ghost stories!