Finding it pretty hard to continue.
1) Lots of silly dialog with the dog. Once every few pages. Example: discussion with Oberon (the dog) on what unit of measurement the dog uses (units of Shepherd pies). Sure, it's cute initially, but every few pages of nonsense talk? Feels like filler to me. Bad.
2) Keeps switching back and forth between Atticus and Granuaile's POVs. Even when they are side by side.
— Jun 25, 2013 08:30PM
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