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I simply cannot.

Boring AF. Spice is mediocre

Spice was not spicing.

When she said ““Max, that was amazing. Thank you.” After he took her VCard I was out

Bored.

Cannot connect with the characters. They are both insufferable (and I usually love an obsessed MC). The FMCs previous relationship was so annoying and the fact that she let him into her house and body after he cheated was so annoying. And the spice was absolutely lackluster. No thanks

Please use contractions!! The storyline makes no sense, especially the cartel part. I enjoy instalove from time to time but for Christ sake these characters met for 10 minutes and didn’t talk for 2 months and then he gets pissed when she “disappears” aka she stays in a hotel in the town she lives in…that makes no sense.

I do not understand how people are saying this is well written. The dialogue does not make sense in many scenes. There is no real backstory given to the characters so this is definitely not a standalone. Certain chapters need extreme editing, literally there is a chapter where the FMC is upset that the MMC isn’t there with her and then all of a sudden she is in his arms????

Good so far