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i see now the run on sentences are a stylistic choice. the narration blends from one perspective into another. its confusing at First, but im already used to it and now that i am its actually charming. theres a clever gimic at some point too when two people speak and their thoughts are colored grey and include a lot of elipsis, further playing with the stream of consciousness concept. i think i do like it after all.

the run on sentences are kiling it for me

the devotion mmmmm

man that devotion... their different love styles, love languages, the "ill die for you" one and the "good" one that breaks down when she do something insane for her (like she asked) mmmmmmmmm

loving them, loving the plant stuff a lot too, the plant gods are terrifying and my fav trope hehe

i love plant magic mmmm

its so good the banter is 100% but the jewish stuff is so jarring in a setting with fantasy everything. its not even an allegory, its lit the hebrew words for everything as a hebrew speaker it throws me right off and yeets me out of emersion wehh. ill finish tho, maybe i can dissociate through this. i love the characters.

Saffron you slutty slutty lil shit I love you so fucking much

precisely the most worth the hype book ive ever read. im at the absolute edge of my seat damn