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Tane
Tane is 20% done
the run on sentences are kiling it for me
Oct 30, 2025 04:33PM
The Trial of Anna Thalberg

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Tane
Tane is 60% done
i see now the run on sentences are a stylistic choice. the narration blends from one perspective into another. its confusing at First, but im already used to it and now that i am its actually charming. theres a clever gimic at some point too when two people speak and their thoughts are colored grey and include a lot of elipsis, further playing with the stream of consciousness concept. i think i do like it after all.
Oct 30, 2025 08:14PM
The Trial of Anna Thalberg


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