Status Updates From The Trial of Anna Thalberg

i see now the run on sentences are a stylistic choice. the narration blends from one perspective into another. its confusing at First, but im already used to it and now that i am its actually charming. theres a clever gimic at some point too when two people speak and their thoughts are colored grey and include a lot of elipsis, further playing with the stream of consciousness concept. i think i do like it after all.

the run on sentences are kiling it for me