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I'm enjoying this slice-of-life story so far. However, even though it's short it's taking me a while to read because the sentences are awkward in English. I often have to re-read them a few times. I don't know if this is an artistic choice or the translator should look for a new job. I like it though!

I can already tell I'm going to love this

Very disappointed so far. I expected this to be literary given the circles it's mentioned in but the writing is extremely basic and amateur. This happened, then he said this, then we went here. No characters are described beyond their race. It's inconsistent and boring. It feels like high school homework.