pushing, coaxing, exploring, losing, forgetting. You can tell from these words that Macon is trying to force Halley to do something shes not ready for. Men have this sense of power and persuasion, and she had almost forgotten her morals to appease him. I think changing the words and choosing different adjectives could've changed the entire narrative and we wouldn't have seen inside Halleys mind.
— Dec 18, 2024 07:41AM
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