Ok so within the first couple of pages the author pulls a HARD “she’s not like other girls.”
Turned me off bad.
THEN “Laila didn’t even bother looking in the massive mirror with the touch sensor as she put her long hair up in a messy topknot. It was way too early to care about appearance.”
but then, it stopped happening. And it started to get REALLY GOOD.
— Apr 15, 2026 03:30PM
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