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Ohhhhh boy. Where's this going?

"Bob, Oz me!" LOL, That got a chuckle

Finally seeing the threads wind together

Okay... how is this gonna wind together?

Still feels like more set up than story

Lol that's a hell of a "relationship talk" on a fake marriage

Loving the subtle world building and side characters

Ooooo, lots of lines tangled

I'm honestly not seeing the through line or plot to this (outside grief), which makes it feel slow.

Backstory is getting a weee bit long here

HAPPY RELEASE DAY MORGAN!!!

OH dear lord, talk about oversimplifying an argument

Well that took a sharp turn lol. Okay at least the author's bias is on the table

Intense vision quest... wittle long but DAMN!!!

Not the point of the chapter but I'd honestly never given thought to HOW ancient cultures did tatoos....


Ow

Still early but I felt like some of the conflict was resolved too quickly in this chapter.

My guess: it'll have an "oh $h!t" pay off later

I love the detailed formatting - helps transition between kingdoms seemlessly

Okay this is weirdly fascinating. I clocked this as Romeo and Juliet within a few minute and... *quick google search* yep. Now, is the author going to stick the landing? Also, how are we going to make this jack-a$$ dateable.

The premise has me curious - I hope I don't regret this

Love the detail about getting headache from street signs because you're accustomed to reading and understanding them so quickly.