Above average so far. Unfortunately, 2 crucial bits of info have already been repeated. And one piece was set up as some big reveal. Eye roll
Umm…you already know this answer. Why did you even ask? Is the FMC not paying attention or does the author think I didn’t get it the first time. Don’t like the weird interjections by some unknown (as yet) narrator. It just didn’t happen soon enough to be fluid.
— Aug 02, 2026 01:17PM
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