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This book could definitely have used another round of editing. So many grammatical errors and the dialogue is just weird. So much telling and not showing and over explaining the Amish culture. I’ll probably end up DNFing it.

I’m currently working my way through the book. I may set it aside until my paperback arrives because there are formatting issues with my eARC.

My thoughts so far: I’m not sure how I feel. I really loved her last series, but I am not as invested in the characters in this one. Also, the author called a magazine a clip and made ethical hunters seem like psychopaths for enjoying hunting.

On chapter 28 and I’m close to DNFing. The MMC is practically engaged to a woman back home…has told the MFC that many times, yet they still kiss. How is that not cheating?

About 5 chapters in and Louisa is making me want to dnf. She’s ruining the book.

About 42% in and struggling. Glo playing the martyr is on my last nerve.

The only thing keeping me from DNFing this book is Tate and I really love SMW’s books. I just cannot stand Glo and how mean she is to Tate. He deserves someone so much better. I get she’s insecure, but her reasonings for pushing him away are just dumb. Is she never going to get married bc her husband at some point may die? It just doesn’t make sense.

Really tempted to dnf just because of all the weight. Too much about how much women weigh or are eating. Working off calories. It’s so annoying.