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“and he was blonde. my standards were low but they weren’t in hell.”

okay period queen

OH THANK GOD ITS CAINE

😭😭😭 he broke up w ivy bc he loved her?????? even then????

i fear wolf/cross extra abilities are what fucked up his mothers mind and he feels so guilty which is why he’s always taking care of her.

WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON

fuckkkkkkkkkk WREN WHY WOULD YOU HAVE DONE THIS OMFG

CLEAARLLLYY the scar was from his own blood mark. like don’t play w me rn bro

okay clearly the guy holding her hostage is her mysterious best friend Wolf

NO NO NO NO NO

OPE.

apollo is a real one for that. i lowkey love apollo

I DONT WANT HER TO WANT LEO I HATE LEO

i hate that i want her to leave her husband for his brother 😭

oh, so..she’s touching herself in front of her mates brother. okay. right.

“he looked even more like their father than my husband did. and he had their fathers cock.” yk what hell yeah

oh a fountain full of cum that everyone drinks. absolute slay, let me at this mating ceremony pls

okay so she steals a vehicle and drives for days and then he just magically finds her in the next page? WHERE ARE THE FUCKIN DETAILS

i’m confused how we went from having sex in the loft to shooting a gun at a fence post? like how did we get here and where is the details babe

no i fear i missed something because there is simply no way our “never trust a man especially one that’s nice to you” girl just suddenly stopped being afraid and kissed this giant cowboy only because they were looking at the stars. like ? where is the longing ? aside gazing upon his shirtless form once there hasn’t even been mention of want so i HAD to have missed something right ?

no because why was the earlier accidental shift in POV in the middle of a chapter to say the fmc cooked fish for her ex, and then we proceed to her burning everything she’s ever tried to cook and that she doesn’t even know how to make a grilled cheese???? make it make sense

i was thinking the writing of this seemed kind of ill thought out/first novel/unedited vibes and the fact that the perspective switches in the middle of a chapter for a paragraph further cements that. like how do you just accidentally switch perspectives for an entire paragraph and not notice during edits ?????

i’m not really vibing with this rn man. idk if it’s the writing or what but this is simply not it for me 😩 pushing through tho in case the many recommendations for me to read this are correct and it gets way better later

oh good so we are ending it with predatory comments being made to a preteen about how she’s going to be pretty when she’s older, from a 16-17 yo boy who knows she has a crush on him????????? no.

is interrupting his own proposal to tell her to stop leaving her shoes places supposed to be romantic or funny? bc it’s neither. it’s actually gross and i hate this man

how is bro gonna say they’re together when they’ve:
1. never been on a date
2. he adamantly told her the night before that it means nothing
3. HE NEVER EVEN ASKED HER OUT

oh so now he’s manhandling her and demanding she doesn’t leave after he basically assaulted her ? what part of this dude is supposed to be likable ?

so you’re telling me that this man took a sick woman to his home and under the guise of taking care of her, he’s now climbing into bed WHILE SHES ASLEEP to fondle her? and then when the girl wakes up and goes with it for a minute then stops BECAUSE HE TOLD HER BEFORE SHE DOESNT MEAN ANYTHING TO HIM he gets mad ???? make it make sense

this is so cringey like how am i supposed to be rooting for a man who actively calls the. other of his child a bitch? she didn’t even DO anything awful awful and he’s so antagonistic towards her. like i get she’s shitty but it doesn’t warrant his reaction and he’s so chauvinistic it’s not even funny. how are we supposed to like this man

i fear this book is so so so so so bad and yet i’m already a significant way through so i must trudge on. please stay tuned for a scathing review

even I am scandalized by what i just read. holy fuck.