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shake well - 4/5

"While I’m staring at myself in the mirror, I notice a little line across my hairline. It’s very thin, but it’s red, and it makes a border around all of my face – like I’m wearing a mask. And when I look closely, there’s a difference in the colour either side of the red line. My face is whiter, smoother, colder; my neck, my jaw and ears are all pinker – they look fleshier than my face does"

nightstalkers - 2.75/5

extinction event - 3.75/5
this was really sad

goth gf - 3.25/5
i liked this but its themes were explored in much more detail/interesting way in rejection

hollow bones - 4.5/5
i LOVE this kind of sci-fi
its so weird, we dont know everything but JUST enough to get through the story, loved the writing too

the shadow over little chitaly - 3.5/5
a half-baked fun story

she's always hungry - 3.75/5
very interesting and would be amazing as a full length novel but unfortunately left too many unanswered questions

at this point in any book, i start to form an opinion, or at least i know how i feel about a book but i just cant really say anything about this
everyhting in this unpredictable and i just dont know where any of this is going
what i CAN say is that i had nightmarish flashbacks to reading house of leaves which is to say this is probably the most horrific book i've ever read even if its not in that genre

the problem solver - an idc/5
too short to say anything

Build a body like mine - 4/5
Really liked this especially that it directly addresses the reader
The food descriptions felt so erotic in a way that I shouldnt be reading this

sixteen metaphors - 3.75/5
probably need to read this a few times before i fully grasp this

main character - 3/5
an interesting take on the rejection of identity itself but i was just left feeling confused after reading this especially with the words or rather 'jargon' used in this story. if i HAD to describe it then its like the 'discourse talk' ppl online use
not that this doesnt have ANY good moments, they are just buried deep in the nonsense

our dope future - an idk/5
i truly dont how i should rate this bcs this is written in the format of a reddit post, so you cant really do a lot with it
i will say though that i LOVED this, the excessive and out of place use of slang was so funny esp bcs a white cis het man was saying it
i also went through so many emotions reading it

i ran out of character limit here :(

ahegao - 4.75/5
the third part of this story is so insane and ridiculous that when you first read you're in denial like oh this HAS to be a joke, this cannot be real but the more you read the more you see the conviction with which the MC is saying all these things. its almost as if you're watching a car crash and cant take your eyes away rather only further into this mess
but i wont recommend this story to anyone

pics - 4.5/5
i need to snatch the thesaurus out of the author's hands

the feminist - 4.25/5
so so so interesting, i think he's insufferable but the author does a good job of letting the reader empathise with him
sometimes it did feel like there were sentences which didn't make sense at all or like the author used thesaurus
i truly don't understand what the ending means though