I like it so far, but I feel like I’m not gonna love it.
I prefer when the MMC’s feelings—even the sexual ones—stay more mysterious. Here, his perspective makes it clear early on that he’s into her, which takes away some of the suspense and emotional tension I love discovering on my own.
I’d rather feel it than be told—that’s how I really live and connect with the story. Still cute, though!
— May 17, 2025 02:08AM
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