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The kids are off on their first journey! While the beginning of the book has disappointingly less character and story depth than the previous book, I'm still so curious to see where they go and what happens.

What a powerful way to start a book. I have no idea what it's about yet, but I can't wait to see

We get it, the goblin is a hot little horn dog. Please stop rubbing our noses in it every other page. It's not even foreshadowing at this point. It's giving "oh no, I ordered pizza and don't have any money... How EVER can I pay you?" Iykyk

The blatant infantalization of our so far nameless main character is giving a little bit of ick, not to mention so many concepts that clash it makes my head spin...

I get wanting to be eloquent and precise when writing, but that doesn't mean you throw a thesaurus at your book. It becomes burdensome to read after a while.

I stg if I read "the little lady" one more time, I'm gonna barf.

I really want to like this book, but it's painfully obvious that the author did not have an editor. Maybe I'm picky, but the paragraphs being left aligned instead of justified makes it difficult to read in many places. Additionally, there's a lot of switches in tense, and things that don't seem to flow well. She's laying there for hours when she thinks she's being chased? Then throws up? The run on sentences too...

I absolutely love this book. The foreshadowing, the character development, I can't wait to see what's next

1:15 into the youtube audio book

What a trip. This poor kid had his whole life flipped over.