The last ~200 pages dragggeeeddd on. I would be more interested in the romance between Ash and Juli if there was more content. 90% of it is just Ash reflecting on the "tragedy". It felt like I was just reading Ash complain and complain and complain, and then I eventually wonder why I even care about their relationship. Who even is Juli? Characterize her a bit more!
Hope the next part refreshes my appetite.
— Mar 25, 2024 05:55PM
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