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Sameer Haider
is on page 467 of 964
The last ~200 pages dragggeeeddd on. I would be more interested in the romance between Ash and Juli if there was more content. 90% of it is just Ash reflecting on the "tragedy". It felt like I was just reading Ash complain and complain and complain, and then I eventually wonder why I even care about their relationship. Who even is Juli? Characterize her a bit more!
Hope the next part refreshes my appetite.
— Mar 25, 2024 05:55PM
Hope the next part refreshes my appetite.
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Sameer Haider
is on page 218 of 964
This is getting good, being introduced to a wide and interesting cast of characters. Ash’s character development is getting fleshed out superbly. Some of these run on sentences make my head turn though lol
— Mar 14, 2024 09:17PM
Sameer Haider
is on page 45 of 964
I want feel it, but I’m not really feeling it…
— Mar 04, 2024 08:23PM