I’m struggling with this 🫣 It’s cute and the banter is great but the inconsistencies are frustrating me 😫 Examples: the POV switched from his to hers then back to his. In the same chapter, she’s wearing his jacket but that happened in the previous chapter. His text is completely different than it was 6 pages before. Texts are mixed up. One minute he’s making lunch, the next they’re saying good night.
— Jul 28, 2025 11:55PM
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