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I’m 70% in and I cannot believe neither of them has Zero guilt about the fact Darcy is Hayden’s BEST FRIENDS, that he’s known since teens, ex gf and they only stopped dating a month before Hayden made his move. Wtf

This book is like Gideon the ninth where you’re dropped off in a world with no explanations. People’s actions don’t make logical sense and the characters always seem to know more than you do

This book is a borefest. Why was it not edited !? 118 pages and flip all has happened. Too many characters, the world building hasn’t been explained properly yet. What was the point in telling us about Yana and Ruko if they’re not the main characters 🙄 and Neema is

How is no one commenting on the causal racism with the way Nim is portrayed!? Every book she repeatedly talks about how America is so great and how she’s saving up to buy a house to bring her family over. And also they make her sound like an idiot when she’s not

I’m offended by the narrators Jamaican accent - seriously WHAT IS THAT. Also the causal racism throughout this series is GRATING. Why does Nin always talk about bringing her family to America, why is Val always talking about how great peoples English is? 🙄

The writing has potential but this plot is a MESS. page 211 and she’s had two lessons in the academy… she’s a rebel without a cause and makes the weirdest decisions. She doesn’t trust easily, but then …keeps telling people things!? She’s weary of Kaelis and ‘hates’ him but just goes along with things he suggests 🙄

This is boring

Chapter 4 - unsure how much of this wise crack type narration I can take

Please author when you’re introducing new concepts in your world building EXPLAIN THEM

First read April 2025

Audiobook March 2026

I’m so confused are we all reading the same set of books here? The plot is all over the place with this one! She ‘loves her best friend’ but hardly makes contact with her - just seems to forget about her in this one. She talks about how she hasn’t known Emory that long then a few chapters later she’s all ‘I love him’ 🙄

Are we all reading the same book. Raven is chaotic and does not know how to take accountability for her actions. She disobeyed Viktor and then blamed fate when he kicked her out of keystone. The back and forth with Christian is just ridiculous. I don’t really see the connection between them - I am sooo close to DNfing this series

Is this girl hardheaded on purpose. She ignores victor, eaves drops and then puts others in danger wtf

Re-listen starting Jan 2026

Audiobook

Oh noooo this is boring 🥱

Okay others in the audible reviews are also talking about how shockingly terrible the British accent is. Like GIRL just stop it sounds TERRIBLE - it’s 100% someone who thinks this is what a posh British accent should sound like but they get really important accent inflections WRONG. and they pronounce words completely wrong

How long is this singing going on for damn

The narrator has a not great British accent. And is definitely overacting. Also the singing in chapter 2 cracked me uppppp. Erm girl you couldn’t use autone 🤣😩

It’s so funny to see my initial criticisms of this book when I first read it. The telling instead of showing won me over with the overall plot. This is one of my favourite series EVER. I’ve registered to the audiobooks maybe a hundred times and I’m on another re-listen now. I wish I logged all the times I re-listened

Trying try dramatised audio

Anyone think that mercy is a bit stupid. She’s meant to be loyal, but then opens her mouth to some random journalist 🙄

I’ve been ‘reading’ this book FOREVER, I tried the audiobook but the British accent is unforgiving tbh. Can publishers just get British narrators PLEASE

Samuel being 60 years old but pining for a 16 year old as his mate because she’s BREEDABLE. WTFFFF

Re-read Nov 2025 , trying the dramatised audio to see if I like it better. It worked with Kate Daniel’s

Does this get better ? It is DRAGGING

I don’t know if I can finish this. I’m on chapter 29 and suffering bad

This break up, after they shagged AND didn’t she say it’s her first time!?