Oliver > Recent Status Updates

"i'll simply make you listen with ~gun~" admirable

no fucking shit "you're being affected by (his) pheromone response" i'm choosing to think that this is no longer canon because HAHAHHAHAHA oh my fucking god coughing laughing dying 'he's so angry right now...... you'd know because you can smell his pheromones....... be aware' like are we so dead ass HAHAHa and to think that it's straight women that writes like this in current year

i really want to stop whining about the way women are written but DAE when the feminine body is inherently sexual??? i can't help but think of sex when i see them??? women are so beauty i want to have sex with them??? sex guys???? se

"he hoped she had strong sons and pretty daughters" bro you could've easily fixed this by saying 'wise daughters' how did you read back your own writing and not realize that oh my god i never want to go back to year 2011

this kind of transhumanism is why i'm so attracted to the adeptus mechanicus it's so delicious oh my godddddddd praise the omnissiah

i wish linya wasn't introduced the way she did 😭now i'm hyper scrutinizing every scene she's in and this is no fucking way to live bro i just want to enjoy an admech story with my silly cyborg people why can't we see women as Normal

fully expected this but yeah, they can't write women. (i've been woke and reading queer works for too long.) the plot is also going quite slow so far to introduce every single party that'll be involved in the trilogy. also the author really likes his 'one line in a separate paragraph as emphasis' writing quirk and i'm Sick of it

skitarii release in darktide finally gave me the push to dig into this franchise after thinking about it for months

putting this on pause for a bit - been in a bad reading slump i gotta find something else to read

i'm being so fucking slow with this one despite enjoying it because i'm balls deep in warhammer right now........... aah...

A- it's so repetitive at this point. this had no reason being 400+ pages, this should've ended a hundred pages ago

teen shenanigans :/

"they fought because it was the easiest language they spoke" *the audience cheers super fucking loudly*

slowed down a bit for that juicy juicy characterization

100 pages of prologue and my god it's cinema all the way through

vivid imagery, very easy to read, i imagine i can fly through this if i sit down and focus

vivid imagery, very easy to read, i imagine i can fly through this if i sit down and focus

worst reading slump in a long while

if i put on my critic hat a bit i'll say that this so far (just finished part 1) is the worst book of the series, but it's like saying dark souls 2 is the worst game in the trilogy where it's still way way way ahead and better than the rest of the competition you know what i mean?

rafael i love you with my whole heart but be so for real just use the character's names 😭 'the soldier', 'the angel', 'the demon', 'the fallen angel' USE NAMES!!!! i have no idea since when does this bother me but it does and i really wish it doesn't

i fucking love rafael nicolas but idk why i had trouble getting into the right mindset to read this. second attempt and i want to finish this!

it's refreshing to read a book by someone who does give a fuck about their own writing

<- this user is filled with literature lately (disco elysium, nier replicant and then this)

wasn't expecting this to be set in japan actually <- guy who hasn't read the blurb

bookclub read for may!