Oliver’s Reviews > Priests of Mars > Status Update

no fucking shit "you're being affected by (his) pheromone response" i'm choosing to think that this is no longer canon because HAHAHHAHAHA oh my fucking god coughing laughing dying 'he's so angry right now...... you'd know because you can smell his pheromones....... be aware' like are we so dead ass HAHAHa and to think that it's straight women that writes like this in current year

i really want to stop whining about the way women are written but DAE when the feminine body is inherently sexual??? i can't help but think of sex when i see them??? women are so beauty i want to have sex with them??? sex guys???? se

"he hoped she had strong sons and pretty daughters" bro you could've easily fixed this by saying 'wise daughters' how did you read back your own writing and not realize that oh my god i never want to go back to year 2011

this kind of transhumanism is why i'm so attracted to the adeptus mechanicus it's so delicious oh my godddddddd praise the omnissiah

i wish linya wasn't introduced the way she did 😭now i'm hyper scrutinizing every scene she's in and this is no fucking way to live bro i just want to enjoy an admech story with my silly cyborg people why can't we see women as Normal

fully expected this but yeah, they can't write women. (i've been woke and reading queer works for too long.) the plot is also going quite slow so far to introduce every single party that'll be involved in the trilogy. also the author really likes his 'one line in a separate paragraph as emphasis' writing quirk and i'm Sick of it