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Great writing

I like “clown’s frown”

The story is not how I expected it to be

Do authors have something against a slow burn damn it?!

What is his name? Like am I just thick or is it “iwanttosuckyourblood?”
Some pretty cringey and at times pretentious writing.
I like that the dialogue feels unique though smile
Oh and I predict something 😉 ‘the violin is the only hint’

Clementine is a criminal name (Sorry to all the citrus ladies with that unfortunate name)

Chef’s kiss to the juxtaposition between her reaction to the news of the job offer and her rejection of it. Great way to show her character!

She a Santa’s laugh

Talk about killing the vibe. New friends to romance is one of my all time favs but wow did I get the ick when he tried to make things romantic. Tfe brother! You’re really kissing her and the other girls at the same time? Men ate disgusting and I think all the bachelors need to reevaluate their soundness of mind.

“Hasn’t your pride hurt us enough?” 🔥

Part of me is happy Buttercup ‘can live without love’ because I think Wesley needs to be severely humbled but I’m also disappointed because well, I enjoy romance.

Unrealistic/ridiculous dialogue
Haram, multiple people have said that shes plain looking or not that pretty and it just kills the vibe

I’m enjoying the general vibe
I don’t like how unprofessional she is sometimes when she said she is super professional
I don’t like how she catches feelings so soon either
I like that the main character has watched his movies. She isn’t just some pick me who is like “I’ve never heard of him”

I don’t buy some things (Shway unrealistic)
I wish a character didn’t call her boring because now I feel like she’s boring

Why does 😉 even like buttercup? He’s made it clear that he thinks she’s not smart so what the heck is the point? Yes she is beautiful but I’m disappointed that that’s all he cares about. Men are disgusting.
Also I don’t like how they reference Buttercup’s shim so much at the beginning.
The scene with Domingo and his friend was hilarious.
I preferred how the movie did the whole dread p Rob thing

It’s cool that the author uses the ‘rewrite’ as a way of skipping past boring stuff.
I believe Goldman is a very talented writer, with dialogue and plot being his strong suits, BUT and it’s a big BUT 🍑 the man is a misogynist and needs a good kaff
The fact that he skipped the reunion scene was truly criminal. Seriously? Your masculinity is so fragile, you can’t even write romantic dialogue? 🙄

Such a good book until … ‘he slapped her’

I don’t like fat-phobia and all the gross male writer vibes

ADHD stream of consciousness writing style.
What in the cheating scumbag?
Why does buttercup smell so much in the beginning?
I enjoy the number thing he’s doing with her beauty.
I get they like each other but they don’t have any proper dialogue before them real big professions of love.

3.7 stars 🌟
Shway let down.

Sick

I don’t like how everyone already knows each other or that the covey are a prominent part of the book as well. It feels all too coincidental