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well this is just a mess
its like a straight pathway and when the author came across a side street, even though it said dead end, he explored it anyway. For NO reason
i doubt someone edited this thing

26 chapters of set-up before anything of note happen

shes persuaded by a pretty dress -what a hero (yak)

things you don't know about people and maybe you shouldn't

geeze, the back and forth is so boring
telling the same story from 3 different POV is just lazy
this could be 1/2 as long and might be bearable

its fun then all of a sudden it started explaining a few of the fairytales but it just didnt sew up well

So slow

Blah

Its still cute

Its still fun, fairly cheesy

the LaStat of the ocean

Its ok not sure im invested enuf to read the next one

Good intro to the characters

Just couldn't get into it

This was terrible! So boring

Cute