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„Shadow had helped them kill her?
Shadow had lied to me and betrayed me for his own means, just when I’d started trusting him.“

Call her an Olympic athlete, the way she’s jumping to unfounded conclusions

„Sure. That would be nice.”
Like getting a Brazilian wax. While wolfed out.“
Lmaoooo

Seriously? His name is Darkor?🤨💀

„Heat flowed from Shadow with an intensity that told me he was a bee’s dick from losing it completely.“

What is this phrase I’m crineee😭😭

Ain’t no way ml is wearing ripped jeans 😔😔 are they skinny too??💔😔

Honestly, I’m really loving her personality so far

„That you’re untouched?”
The laughter burst out of me before I could stop it. “Definitely not. I’ve touched myself more times than I can count.“

Okay now THAT was funny 💀💀

„His chest rumbled…“

What does this even meannn?😭😭 and why is he constantly doing it??

Nahh why is her Scottish💀💀 That’s such an unsexy accent

„Never waste time on bad books. There were too many amazing stories out there waiting to be discovered.“

Is this a sign?

„They’d graduated last year, but for some insane reason, would not leave.“

Straight up loser behavior😭😭 why are we depicting the antagonists like this, I CANNOT take then seriously💀💀

„I couldn’t stay in any enclosed space for too long or I’d end up with the crap beat out of me.“

Dang okay girl💀

Counted a total of 18 spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes😬 definitely could have been edited some more

„And her heartbeat was a faint, barely-there echo.“

Bro her plot armor is crazyyy💀 you’re telling me after that she still ain’t dead??

„My father—and I—had been wrong about many things“

Bro just noticed?

„Give us the boulder!” His voice was shrill with desperation.
“No—fuck you!” someone else screamed.“

Tf kinda dialogue is that😭😭💀

„Because I do love you. You’re my best friend. And that’s just as valuable as a lover.“

Wild thing to say to someone you just friendzoned💀💀

„Kis her until she forgot the weight of the world pressing down on her“

When he gives you a kis😍😍🥰❤️‍🔥

„would she still idolize him if she knew what he really was?“

Wait why are we acting like the fathers actions weren’t pretty reasonable?💀 like what else was he supposed to do? sacrifice his 15 (FITFTEEN!) year old daughter??

„Wait. That daughter? That was the daughter Ragnall had come to rescue?“

??? Well, how many others of his daughters are missing?

„Rykr’s eyes, molten hot with lust, swept down the curve of my throa. His thumb traced the hallow at my collarbone“

Throa? Hallow at her collarbone? Why are we inventing new body parts??😭😭

„They not the Vangar“

Me when they not the Vangar😔

„I peered closer at the dark-skinned beauty“
💀💀

„Where Seren was petite and lithe, Amahle was tall, lean, and graceful. Dark-skinned.
Both were beautiful, though.“

The way you can just tell that this was written by a white person😭😭😭😭😭

How much more often are they going to literally say how appealing they find each other?
This should be shown, not told

„The corners of mouth curved. “Such a dirty mouth on a pretty face.“

Grammatical error and an absolutely diabolical line right next to each other!😃 How fun!

„Holding my breath, I slipped under the surface slowly, trying to behave like a man enjoying the bracing cold, rather than suffering the insane torture that it was.
A thousand sharp needles stabbed into my skin“

Wouldn’t Seren feel that too? Stunde is causing him pain?

„How are the happy couple this morning“

This is like the fifth grammatical error I found and we‘re only 25% into the book

Of course there has to be a nickname 😐

„You’ll go to Emberstone in a week Lirien“

A comma is missing