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Counted a total of 18 spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes😬 definitely could have been edited some more

„And her heartbeat was a faint, barely-there echo.“

Bro her plot armor is crazyyy💀 you’re telling me after that she still ain’t dead??

„My father—and I—had been wrong about many things“

Bro just noticed?

„Give us the boulder!” His voice was shrill with desperation.
“No—fuck you!” someone else screamed.“

Tf kinda dialogue is that😭😭💀

„Because I do love you. You’re my best friend. And that’s just as valuable as a lover.“

Wild thing to say to someone you just friendzoned💀💀

„Kis her until she forgot the weight of the world pressing down on her“

When he gives you a kis😍😍🥰❤️‍🔥

„would she still idolize him if she knew what he really was?“

Wait why are we acting like the fathers actions weren’t pretty reasonable?💀 like what else was he supposed to do? sacrifice his 15 (FITFTEEN!) year old daughter??

„Wait. That daughter? That was the daughter Ragnall had come to rescue?“

??? Well, how many others of his daughters are missing?

„Rykr’s eyes, molten hot with lust, swept down the curve of my throa. His thumb traced the hallow at my collarbone“

Throa? Hallow at her collarbone? Why are we inventing new body parts??😭😭

„They not the Vangar“

Me when they not the Vangar😔

„I peered closer at the dark-skinned beauty“
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„Where Seren was petite and lithe, Amahle was tall, lean, and graceful. Dark-skinned.
Both were beautiful, though.“

The way you can just tell that this was written by a white person😭😭😭😭😭

How much more often are they going to literally say how appealing they find each other?
This should be shown, not told

„The corners of mouth curved. “Such a dirty mouth on a pretty face.“

Grammatical error and an absolutely diabolical line right next to each other!😃 How fun!

„Holding my breath, I slipped under the surface slowly, trying to behave like a man enjoying the bracing cold, rather than suffering the insane torture that it was.
A thousand sharp needles stabbed into my skin“

Wouldn’t Seren feel that too? Stunde is causing him pain?

„How are the happy couple this morning“

This is like the fifth grammatical error I found and we‘re only 25% into the book

Of course there has to be a nickname 😐

„You’ll go to Emberstone in a week Lirien“

A comma is missing

„Where is there mercy?“
This feels grammatically incorrect

„Clever little bitch.“

Hell nah if a man ever called me that I’d punch him in the face

„If we fail, you won’t leave at all.“

If she was aware how the Vioris would react when they saw Rykr, why did she bring him? Their fight happened close to the Pandarran border, so she could have just dropped him off there and let his people find him?

„My hair was dark.“

Naurrrrr now he just looks like every other romantasy ml😔😔

„The bottom of the arena, where the competitors emerged, was roughly a thousand feet“

A thousand feet what? Squared? Across? Huh?

„That even though one day I would kneel before Jasad’s judges in the afterlife to account for it, I would not renounce a single moment of loving the Nizahl Heir“

AHHHHHHHHHHH

„What appeal can reason have in the face of your tears?“

Gah damn😫

„Half a leg bulged from the center of its torso“

Me fr

„Birds had practiced their sweet songs for generations, but even their music did not compare to the sound of Arin’s laugh.“
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„Who did this to you?“

YES YES YESSSS🙌 THIS TROPE HAS ME FOAMING AT THE MOUTH KSKDJDJWLSKDJ

„Rawain is cruel by nature, but you?” I lifted my chin, spearing him with the full force of my wrath. “You are cruel by choice.“

Ate applause applause

„Arin is consumed by what he loves. If asked, he would get on his knees and let it kill him. He withholds his heart out of self-preservation.“

Nom nom nom delectable 🫦 love me a ml with high yearn potential