Author tries to hard to poetically describe things; does it obsessively from every character’s POV breaking illusion of individual characters, does it in scenes not matching emotional gravitas of situation. character describes sky while next to his wife who’s in labor while on the run from enemies and without any doctor: “Above us, stained clouds are tumbling in titanic slow motion over a winking sun.”Pg307
— Sep 25, 2026 11:33PM
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