Okay so, while I’m enjoying this (as I needed a brain rot type of romantasy), who edited this book? Did you not notice the use of “he/she clicked her tongue” over and over and over again? I need some variation. “He let out a soft tsk,” “she pressed her lips together then spoke.” Give me SOMETHING other than a tongue click! Okay. Rant over. Back to reading.
— Apr 30, 2026 07:10AM
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