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Ch. 2:

Kind of slow. A lot of history and little details. Glad she made it across. Ummm, let’s debrief Jack. The sexual tension just rapidly increases. Like thank God she let him keep his balls (I feel that will be important later lol). He still won’t kill her? Like be so for real.

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Ch. 1:

I feel so bad for Violet, all she wanted was to be a scribe. I love the detail and little things put into the first chapter, it really sets up the book. RIP DYLAN!!! I hate that he was killed off so quick. His poor girlfriend…Dare i talk about Xaden!? I just know they are gonna link. And he didn’t kill her?? Like hello, it’s love at first sight lol.

Annotation: 5 character intros, 1 emotional moment.