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Lost interest in these characters. There’s little grounding to the plot. Flash back after flashback. Disorienting to the point of annoyance. MMC constantly doesn’t show up through these flashbacks but we’re calling this a love story? OK 😩🙄

I’m bored reading this. I did not need 30+ pages of descriptive scenery. Grown men working from the perspective of a 16 year old girl is 🤮. Knowing essentially a 20 something fuck boy with a twirly mustache is going to be this child’s down fall is comical at best.

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