I do NOT like this. Am confused. There is nothing unique about each of the three POVs that can help me differentiate. They feel like the same person with different names. It takes me far too long to figure out who we switched to. Plus the plot is moving AGONIZINGLY SLOW. Also I can’t follow what is going on because of the way it’s written? It’s like I’m inside my adhd head where the thought changes quickly
— Apr 12, 2026 06:24PM
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