"Midday twilight", there is no such thing. The sun has to be below the horizon for twilight. This story has also turned paranormal, now, at almost 50% with no foreshadowing, to make the plot come together. I wonder if he started out writing with this intention, or if it was out of desperation to make the story work? His writing can be beautiful, but there is also a lot of dry boring content.
— Sep 01, 2025 01:28PM
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