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DNF - a bit too dark for me and I’m not enjoying the writing style, needs a lot of editing too 😅

MY HEART IS IN MY THROAT.

Wild ass guess: her mom is responsible for the scars on his back!

Aw hell is Mira gonna die

Ridoc is totally gonna be killed off at some point. They always kill off the comedic relief 😩

Dude her mom is probably actually evil af huh?

I wonder if Violet is going to have to choose between Mira & Xaden in the future. This is obviously going to get political and where her loyalties lie will probably be tested between being a faithfully ignorant soldier vs questioning what she’s being taught and told. “History is told by the victor” type stuff

I’m going to make the most random ass guess, but I’m curious if Violet is actually Tyrr somehow? I guess that wouldn’t make sense since Tyrrs have the relics marking them 🤔 oh well, just a thought

Hm. I think maybe it’s been Jeff pretending to be The Society all along, but he’s not actually The Society?

Maybe it’s Meredith or Irene? But that doesn’t make sense bc of the POV with being in class with Colt… ugh

I love Colt & Linc’s friendship 🥹
“If you ever get lost, I’ll find you,” I vow, not wanting to let the woods keep him. He’s all I’ve got.
He tilts his head toward me, his genuine smile back on his lips. “I know you would, Colt. You always do.”

Aw. This poor baby was just told he’s Ken’s half brother, didn’t he? 🥲 (Linc)

THIS MAN EATS IT FOR HIS OWN PLEASURE UUUUUUGGGGHHHHHH 😫 *bites lip*

Random thought but I bet the society— the povs that we’ve been getting— has been more than one person

JESUS FUCK THEY ARE HOT

WAIT A SECOND, MAYBE ITS JEFF?

ITS THOMAS. STG ITS THOMAS! “He killed a part of me” in reference to how Linc’s mom was pregnant with his child!! And his golden opportunity had to do with knocking her up!

OKAY JUST KIDDING ITS COLLEEN AND THE PERSON SHE IS SPEAKING TO IS EITHER THOMAS OR THE TWIN BROTHER

Okay, I’m changing. I think the manipulator is Thomas.

I think it’s the lack of on page intimacy and personal connection that makes me feel less connected with them.